Phoenix Monochrome


It starts out almost as an afterthought. A memory, perhaps.

They have finished feeding and stand content when, unexpected, one of them will move like this. And, as close to always as can be, that is where it also ends. But sometimes the next one responds by moving like that. And the one beside it will follow with another complicated motion. And the others will join in.

It seems so easy and graceful. Move follows move in a spiraling ballet until the whole flock tunes in. The beauty of the dance, the unity of it is overwhelming.

And then they take flight.

If you were there and saw them ascend

(you aren´t and you won´t and you never will),

you would never believe your eyes. Science would cover them, tell them:

“What you see is impossible. We can prove it.”

And science would not be lying. But this has nothing to do with science at all.

There they are, up in the sky as one. There is magnificence to them, but also a sadness as they hover over the icy prison where the world with no stories has forced them to dwell. Together they are all the colors of imagination, all the shapes of legend. They are Bennu, Thunderbird and Simurgh. They are Phoenix. They are Crow and they are Minokawa.

For that one moment there are no belly-slides, no waddling, no orcas, no fear.

For that one moment they are whole.

Blink and it´s gone.



Filed under Flash fiction

2 responses to “Phoenix Monochrome


    Hey, can I use this pheonix image on an applique I am making?

    • You know, I’ve actually no idea where that is from. I’m assuming Wikimedia Commons, because that’s where pretty much all the pics I use are from. So, yeah, by all means use it as far as I’m concerned.

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